Re: Recommend FanFiction [Mai-HiME + Mai-Otome]

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Mon Mar 12, 2012 3:44 pm

Luu Sky Sapphire quickly reviews: "La Petite Mort" by Literary Anomaly

Mai-Series Ship: Shizuru F. & Natsuki K.

My pal Stephanie plugged her work on our Facebook group, so I decided to check it out. It's a ShizNat story (yeah, yeah, "we're sick of them" blah blah blah whole thing). So we have a lemony one shot with a dominant Natsuki having her way with Shizuru (a nice turn around, it can't always be Natsuki on her back). Anyone not embarrassed enough to admit they enjoy bondage will have a great time here. Anomaly has a gift few authors have with smut; she is able to make her visionary world into a funhouse. That is the feeling I got out of this smut because of how experimental and knowledgeable Natsuki was. The blue haired bitch knew every trick in the book with Shizuru as her unwavering love slave. The very instant those slow "Nat....su....ki......I....ke....zu" exchanges took place, I was literally on cloud nine.

Smut is rarely good. Fans write their romps in such generic fashion, it could be anyone fucking one another. Miss Anomaly has an idea of what sex is and though there is OOC up the anus here, it's better written than a lot of yuri smut out there. It's not so much the characters as the work put into making Shizuru Natsuki's.

B. ShizNat2

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You can read "La Petite Mort" by Literary Anomaly on Fanfiction.net here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7604261/1/La_Petite_Mort

by **Moneypenny** Tue Mar 20, 2012 6:38 pm

Okay, this post will be an odd one, but I really don't know where to put this. I'm not recommending a fic here, I'm searching for one.

Plot-wise I can't remember much, all I do know is that Natsuki dies and leaves Shizuru behind, who has to live her life alone. And there was a funeral scene, with an internal devastated and numb Shizuru, if I remember correctly. Granted, there is a chance that I'm mixing up two fanfictions - namely "You are my angel" by Bad one and "Never Leave Me" by BananaTeaLeaf - but I'm not sure about that and could swear I've seen a fic that fits my poorly description; I don't have other informations such as genre, length etc. makoto

Anyone here who coud help?

by **IlliterateKoi** Tue Mar 20, 2012 7:29 pm

Moneypenny wrote:Okay, this post will be an odd one, but I really don't know where to put this. I'm not recommending a fic here, I'm searching for one.

Plot-wise I can't remember much, all I do know is that Natsuki dies and leaves Shizuru behind, who has to live her life alone. And there was a funeral scene, with an internal devastated and numb Shizuru, if I remember correctly. Granted, there is a chance that I'm mixing up two fanfictions - namely "You are my angel" by Bad one and "Never Leave Me" by BananaTeaLeaf - but I'm not sure about that and could swear I've seen a fic that fits my poorly description; I don't have other informations such as genre, length etc.

Anyone here who coud help?

Hmmm...possibly Reincarnation by Fushigi na Hito? Natsuki goes to the shop or something and is shot, leaving Mai to pass on some words to Shizuru...sound familiar at all? lol It's the first fic I thought of when I read your post anyway. Here's the link if you want to check;

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4868516/1/Reincarnation

Hope I managed to help :3

by **Moneypenny** Tue Mar 20, 2012 8:04 pm

IlliterateKoi wrote:Here's the link if you want to check;

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4868516/1/Reincarnation

Hope I managed to help :3

I can't thank you enough, that's exactly the story I was searching for! *random hug*

by **ookamidesu** Sun Jun 24, 2012 11:41 am

I've recently come across a fic that I really like to read, so I figured I should recommend it:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8122309/1/A_Fairy_Tale

Chapter 1 has the most elaborate pick-up line in it. XD

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Mon Jun 25, 2012 3:56 pm

ookamidesu wrote:I've recently come across a fic that I really like to read, so I figured I should recommend it:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8122309/1/A_Fairy_Tale

Chapter 1 has the most elaborate pick-up line in it. XD

Thank you so much, Mulan. ;_; A long time ago, you credited someone for keeping you up with Glee fics. Now you're keeping me up with the latest Mai-Series fanfiction. I've honestly lost track and need someone to give me recommendations. ;_;

by **Whirlwind Rose Quarts** Tue Sep 04, 2012 5:59 am

Of all the fanfics that I have read StarvingLunatic 's really caught my attention along with Han dj 's .

As mentioned above A Fairy Tale? is a great fic, along with 'Wild One' by imaspfan .

by **DefyingMisery** Wed Nov 14, 2012 11:03 am

There are a lot of fics I like

First of all, ShayP is an amazing author, check out Siren of the Sea, her other works are good too, but my fav would be the one I mentioned. Shizuru and Natsuki as pirates, and yes, the story is quite dark, adventurous, and quite angsty some point. But I love it, it's not completed yet though. Not an immediate love at first sigh, not immediate attraction purely on appearances alone, and lady fumi not some corny dialogues.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5305195/1/Siren-of-the-Sea

Fuuka academy for naturally gifted (such a lengthy title lol), it's also very amazing, my first favourite fic, not as dark as ShayP's, but still, supernatural, adventure, always awesome to read.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5193989/1/Fuuka-Academy-for-the-Naturally-Gifted

Icemera is also an awesome writer, check out Whisper from the forest and Legend of the Vampire
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/928195/Icemera

Melting the ice maiden is unfinished but it is so fluffy I love it. Not love at first sigh, yay, and Natsuki is incredibly cute yet still bad ass in here. Shizuru is well, always a tease.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7081563/1/Melting-the-Ice-Maiden

These fics I have mentioned are very long :D, don't be put off by the length lol. I really enjoy long stories and sometime even sad reading the last chapter. I don't really like one shot, coz well, oneshot is never enough :)

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Mon May 20, 2013 7:12 pm

ookami desu's latest fanfiction is up!

Category: Mai HiME
Character: Mai T., Nao Y.

Words: 1,649
Genre: General/Romance
Rating: Rated: T

"I clenched my fists and was only 0.23 seconds away from lunging at them when
Mai grabbed my hand and placed her lips next to the shell of my ear. "Easy
there, tiger," she whispered."

You can read Dye's new story here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9307990/1/

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Tue May 21, 2013 6:16 pm

GoldenSun13's returns to Mai-HiME/Otome fanfiction with her latest story - "Open Sesame"!

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Dr. Kruger 'verse. When a CEO of a technology business dies from an allergic reaction, Detective Mai Tokiha and Doctor Natsuki Kruger think nothing of it, until certain circumstances make them believe that all is not what it seems. The sequel to Always and Forever.

Rated: Fiction M - English - Crime/Mystery - Natsuki Kuga & Shizuru Fujino - Words: 1,921 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 2 - Published: 05-21-13

Hello everybody! Welcome to my next story based in my Dr. Kruger universe. First of all I would like to say thank you to everyone who commented and Favorited Always and Forever. I apologise if I have not been able to reply to your comments. I have a feeling a few did not send as FF kept stopping them from sending. Secondly I will just say that I am sorry for the time it took me to actually sit down a write a new installment. I had so many story planned out, but I could never really get into them. With this one, things seemed to click. I was hoping to write the whole story first and then publish it, however between work and uni exams, I needed a bit more motivation. This is why I am giving chapter one to you all in the hopes that your likes and faves will push me forward :)

Thank you all again and I hope you enjoy this chapter,

GoldenSun13

You can read GoldenSun's newest fanfiction here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9314000/1/Open-Sesame

by **GoldenSun13** Wed May 22, 2013 6:31 am

Thanks for the recommendation!

(Don't forget to read my other stuff peeps Shizuru Fujino

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by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Wed May 22, 2013 8:02 pm

GoldenSun13 wrote: Thanks for the recommendation!

(Don't forget to read my other stuff peeps )

No problem, J. Just going to give you a heads up that my review will be posted on your deviantART. I'd do it here, but there's no solo thread for Open Sesame. :'3

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Fri May 24, 2013 4:06 pm

Wow! Lots of MM Superstars are returning to fanfiction lately! Here is an new entry from Alyssa Angeo from our Facebook community:

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Hi guys~!
Can you please read my story?
Give some comments? Reviews?
Rated T
AU with slight OOCness...
Mai-hime with slight Kuroko no Basuke...
Please be gentle, It's my first story...

Title is 'The Hidden Miracle?'
What? The Generation of Miracles has a seventh member? What? It's not a he? It's a SHE? Read and find out... This is an AU story... with slight OOCness...

Rated: Fiction T - English - Humor/Romance - Natsuki K. & Shizuru F. - Chapters: 6 - Words: 15,581

Read here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9310399/1/The-Hidden-Miracle

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Mon Jun 03, 2013 6:03 pm

GoldenSun13 has released chapter 2 of 'Open Sesame' titled "A Game of Ping Po" is now online!

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Hello everyone. I've got two things I quickly want to say before the beginning: To the people that are squeamish about autopsies/surgeries, it isn't too graphic but there will be Natsuki performing an autopsy in the second part of this chapter. Also, in this universe, Mikoto is a Tokiha. I quite liked Mai's dream that we see in Mai Hime. Just a quick background in the AU: Mikoto lived a few houses away from the Tokiha's and was good friends with both Takumi and Mai. When her parents died in a freak accident involving a falling piano, Mai's parents didn't think twice about adopting little, 6 year old Mikoto (and Mikoto didn't think twice about studying physic in the hope that she would one day defeat gravity.)

A big thank you to all who have reviewed/followed this story and Always and Forever. Hearing my e-mail ping every now and again was a big help when I was finishing off this chapter.

I think that's about it. I hope you enjoy and keep the reviews coming! :)

Rated: Fiction M - English - Crime/Mystery - Natsuki Kuga & Shizuru Fujino

GoldenSun13

You can read GoldenSun's newest chapter here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9314000/2/Open-Sesame

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Sat Jun 15, 2013 12:36 pm

New fanfiction entry from Dye aka ookami desu!

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Title: Broken

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9391168/1/

Category: Mai HiME
Characters: Mai Tokiha, Nao Yuuki.

Words: 3,327
Genre: Drama/Angst
Rating: Rated: M

She wanted to break me? This woman who barely even knows me, barely knows what
I'm about... thinks she can break me? I could barely contain myself. My
chuckle turned into a laugh. "Break me?" I repeated questioningly. "You want
to... break me? You think a few cuts and bruises can break me? You're
underestimating me, bitch."

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Sat Jul 13, 2013 2:23 pm

Alyssa Angeo of Mai-Multiverse Facebook shared this new fanfiction with us today:

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I don't know if this is your type but please try to read it...
It's my first story actually...
It's SHIZNAT + Basketball + Kuroko no Basuke + humor =The Hidden Miracle
Appreciate it if you would read it guys and leave a review if you're an author in Fanfiction.net~!

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Author: Kazuki-kun11
What? The Generation of Miracles has a seventh member? What? It's not a he? It's a SHE? Read and find out... This is an AU story... with slight OOCness...
Rated: Fiction T - English - Humor/Romance - Natsuki K. & Shizuru F. - Chapters: 10 - Words: 42,605 - Reviews: 71 - Favs: 24 - Follows: 31 - Updated: 07-13-13 - Published: 05-20-13

Read here:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9310399/1/The-Hidden-Miracle

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Sat Aug 24, 2013 12:30 am

Wuzzupy13 aka GoldenSun13's latest chapter for her story, "Open Sesame".

Hello
everyone. Sorry for the long pause, but between moving house and university
exams/essays, I didn’t have enough time to think let alone sit and write.
Anyway, I hope you enjoy this chapter :3

One more thing, I was thinking of updating my Kruger Side stories. Does anyone have
any requests into the background of the characters in my Dr Kruger universe?
Perhaps some college ShizNat or some younger Mikoto and Mai’s childhood? Also,
I used to draw a monthly comic strip for Ara Ara! Oi Oi! Does anyone have any
requests? I have some free time between now and October and it would be nice to
get back to drawing.

You can read it here:

Open Sesame Chapter Three

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My comment:

As usual, you pulled out a tremendous chapter, J. While we get an investigative report of sorts, there's more fun in this chapter with all the interaction. The rice puppies were hilariously subtle, it made me laugh more than it should. I also dug the 4th wall-ish "If we were anime characters, your eating habits would be the one thing fanfiction writers would over use." humor. They know what their audience would be like. Kudos, J.

I can't believe I'm saying this, but I'd like to see more of Mikoto and Mai's childhood first. It predates ShizNat during their university days, so it's only logical to go chronological.

Requests for Ara Ara! Oi Oi? Well, I highly recommend any strange, random or awkward real life you yourself as a person have been going through. Only apply it to any of the Mai-HiME/Otome. People like humor that comes from our daily mundane lives. It's more "real".

by **The Fire Stirring Ruby** Thu Oct 24, 2013 11:46 pm

After a torturous hour, I managed to find this one fan fic that I was scanning long before.

Mai-HiME: The Golden Millennium

Though the Festival has ended, the Star destroyed and the First District disbanded, there’s still one organisation left that isn’t done with Fuuka or the HiME.

Apparently, the story revolves around the Mai-Otome omake 1 (Mai-HiME Fake movie trailer). This is all as much as I could say. It is complete, as of date.

by **karublue** Fri Mar 14, 2014 2:30 am

Well, as I said in my previous post, I'm a book worm and I have read a lot of fanfics... however I can say that I do have a favorite story which is the one I'm currently reading...

StarvingLunatic Metal Saga all 4 of them (there is actually a 5th one in between called Ring Mail but I think is an external collaboration):

Dents in Her Armor, Reinforced Steel, Playing with Mercury, and the one I'm currently reading Tin Soldiers

If you are up to long stories with a LOT of plot/drama/passion and well written overall then this is the one for you! XD I'll recommend it to the awesome ShizNation a hundred times over!!! XD

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Mon May 19, 2014 12:29 pm

New fanfiction from ookami desu aka Dye! Zhang

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Next Contestant

Mai HiME

Words: 2,580
Genre: Romance/Drama
Rated: T
Character: [Mai T., Nao Y.]

Story summary:
Mai works at a bar where the patrons are always hitting on Mai and Nao doesn't like it one bit. What does Nao do about it? MaiNao.

Read this fanfiction here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10360358/1/

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Thu Jun 05, 2014 11:54 pm

Another from ookami desu aka Dye! I'll be checking it out after I read Zwei's latest Panicking Lily.

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Realizations
By: ookami desu

An unexpected visit from Mai causes Nao to realize something. The problem is, she doesn't really like this new found realization, but what can she do about it? MaiNao. Set in the same universe as Control.

Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Friendship - [Mai T., Nao Y.] - Words: 3,151

Read here: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10370264/1/

by **A.Kuga** Wed Sep 03, 2014 7:41 pm

I have read a lot of fanfiction specially ShizNat since I watched it. I gotta say my absolutely favorite one is one called Inter Nos, I love my history, my shiznat and my Roman/greek ancient cultures and this fic has it all.

I like long stories and this one has over 1 000 000 words, I started reading it when I was like 17 and it hasn't finished yet it has 66 chapters and last time I saw it was like over 300 pages when you put it in word or PDF, it's a book and it's epic.

The author writes in such a way that makes me want to get better at writing just so I can be half as good. It has Shizuma and Nagisa, Chikane and Himeko and Mai-Hime/Otome characters.

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3816271/1/Inter-Nos

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Mon Nov 30, 2015 9:22 pm

Check out Dye's (ookamidesu; your resident Hero of China and moderator) latest MaiNao fanfiction: Controlverse

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Controlverse

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11637185/1/

Mai HiME

Words: 231
Genre: General/Romance
Rated: T
Character: [Mai T., Nao Y.]

Random drabbles for controlverse. Not posted in chronological order; will eventually create a timeline for this. MaiNao. f/f

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CHAPTER 2 IS ALSO UP!

New chapter from ookami desu,

Controlverse
Chapter 2: Haunted House

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11637185/2/Controlverse

Mai HiME

Words: 641
Genre: General/Romance
Rated: T
Character: [Mai T., Nao Y.]

Summary: My vision darted left and right, up and down, looking anywhere and everywhere for something. I don't know what and I don't know how, but something to do something about this. I was not going down without a fight. [Random drabbles for controlverse. Not posted in chronological order; will eventually create a timeline for this. MaiNao. f/f]

by **ookamidesu** Tue Dec 01, 2015 11:35 pm

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11637185/3/Controlverse

Ch 3 is up. This one is to the prompt Squid... which Mai loves and Nao hates.

Alternatively, you can read all the installments I have so far on: ookamidesu.blogspot.com. I've just been copying and pasting it onto ff.net when I find the time. xD

by **Luu Sky Sapphire** Fri Dec 11, 2015 10:48 pm

ookamidesu wrote:https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11637185/3/Controlverse

Ch 3 is up. This one is to the prompt Squid... which Mai loves and Nao hates.

Alternatively, you can read all the installments I have so far on: ookamidesu.blogspot.com. I've just been copying and pasting it onto ff.net when I find the time. xD

Thing I learned while reading Controlverse: Nao must have Autism. Nao Yuuki

Everything Mai says is usually met with quick and heavy sarcasm. XD

BTW, Nao, you *DO* like cookies. Don't lie! DON'T BLATANTLY LIE!!!

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