Need idea for a Harukino doujin/comic

I am planning to have a 10-page doujin/comic done on Harukino, but I have no idea what to based it on? Any ideas? A short summary would be good enough.

Ever thought about centering the story around the events leading up to the Student Council election? It'd be a good chance to see Haruka and Yukino get very close, working together (much to Yukino's delight as she gets to work with her best friend. The best friend she fell in love with) and expressing frustration about Shizuru.

I see it as a tender little love story between two best friends. Plus it's a good chance to shoot on Shizuru as a character, seeing how you don't like her very much. mandy. ;3 Expose Fujino-san for what she really is.

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:Ever thought about centering the story around the events leading up to the Student Council election? It'd be a good chance to see Haruka and Yukino get very close, working together (much to Yukino's delight as she gets to work with her best friend. The best friend she fell in love with) and expressing frustration about Shizuru.

I see it as a tender little love story between two best friends. Plus it's a good chance to shoot on Shizuru as a character, seeing how you don't like her very much. mandy. ;3 Expose Fujino-san for what she really is.

How about after the carnival? I was thinking about them getting together meanwhile Haruka expose Shizuru for what she is, finally for once getting the upper hand. I was thinking through Yukino, they show that Shizuru was cheating most of the time to get high grades.

mandygirl78 wrote:How about after the carnival? I was thinking about them getting together meanwhile Haruka expose Shizuru for what she is, finally for once getting the upper hand. I was thinking through Yukino, they show that Shizuru was cheating most of the time to get high grades.

That could work seeing how there's little trust left after what happened between them. Defeating the Obsidian Lord was a common goal, it doesn't necessarily settle things between Shizuru and Haruka x Yukino. Not with a "Kanin na" apology anyway. ;p

With Yukino's HiME powers still in tact, she could exploit how Fujino-san remained on top at Fuuka. Careful though, mandy; Shizuru is a performer of unpleasant tasks. In short...

...make a story around that. ;p

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:

mandygirl78 wrote:How about after the carnival? I was thinking about them getting together meanwhile Haruka expose Shizuru for what she is, finally for once getting the upper hand. I was thinking through Yukino, they show that Shizuru was cheating most of the time to get high grades.

That could work seeing how there's little trust left after what happened between them. Defeating the Obsidian Lord was a common goal, it doesn't necessarily settle things between Shizuru and Haruka x Yukino. Not with a "Kanin na" apology anyway. ;p

With Yukino's HiME powers still in tact, she could exploit how Fujino-san remained on top at Fuuka. Careful though, mandy; Shizuru is a performer of unpleasant tasks. In short...

...make a story around that. ;p

Hmm... Some wheels are turning in my head. Haruka meets Yukino, fustrated, so Yukino used her Child to spy on Shizuru and see what she is.

Another idea came up in my head. Haruka and Shizuru enters into a contest, and finally Haruka wins. Yukino congratulates her and then they proceed to kiss. Don't know what type of contest thought, probably a cosplay contest.

mandygirl78 wrote:Hmm... Some wheels are turning in my head. Haruka meets Yukino, fustrated, so Yukino used her Child to spy on Shizuru and see what she is.

Another idea came up in my head. Haruka and Shizuru enters into a contest, and finally Haruka wins. Yukino congratulates her and then they proceed to kiss. Don't know what type of contest thought, probably a cosplay contest.

: Shizuru, I'm afraid mandy's been thinking.

: A dangerous pastime for her~

: I knoooow.

A cosplay contest could set up exploitation for Shizuru. In other words: embarrassment. Or you could have Haruka beat Shizuru at her own game with a sort of sequel to the Cake Wars episode; except maybe a tea ceremony contest. >:3 Somewhere beneath the GUTS is GRACE, Haruka! SHOW IT!

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:

mandygirl78 wrote:Hmm... Some wheels are turning in my head. Haruka meets Yukino, fustrated, so Yukino used her Child to spy on Shizuru and see what she is.

Another idea came up in my head. Haruka and Shizuru enters into a contest, and finally Haruka wins. Yukino congratulates her and then they proceed to kiss. Don't know what type of contest thought, probably a cosplay contest.

: Shizuru, I'm afraid mandy's been thinking.

: A dangerous pastime for her~

: I knoooow.

A cosplay contest could set up exploitation for Shizuru. In other words: embarrassment. Or you could have Haruka beat Shizuru at her own game with a sort of sequel to the Cake Wars episode; except maybe a tea ceremony contest. >:3 Somewhere beneath the GUTS is GRACE, Haruka! SHOW IT!

Yeah, that would work. I think I can put Nao into this. Maybe she's the one who embarrassed her.

Nao Yuuki is part of the "big 3" who want revenge on Shizuru, I'd say go for it. Be gentle now...

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:Nao Yuuki is part of the "big 3" who want revenge on Shizuru, I'd say go for it. Be gentle now...

I got it! I think... Haruka enters into a cosplay show. The rule is that the costumes must be homemade - can't be bought and that no more than two other people can assist. Of course Yukino joins in and maybe Nao helps - but with a price.

The contest starts and Shizuru won first place, as usual. Haruka comes in second. That was until Nao founds out that Shizuru's costume was not homemade (How does she? I haven't figured it out.) Then Shizuru had to admit that she cheated. Thus finally Haruka has her moment.

Finally she and Yukino had their time together and they kissed. The end.

mandygirl78 wrote:I got it! I think... Haruka enters into a cosplay show. The rule is that the costumes must be homemade - can't be bought and that no more than two other people can assist. Of course Yukino joins in and maybe Nao helps - but with a price.

The contest starts and Shizuru won first place, as usual. Haruka comes in second. That was until Nao founds out that Shizuru's costume was not homemade (How does she? I haven't figured it out.) Then Shizuru had to admit that she cheated. Thus finally Haruka has her moment.

Finally she and Yukino had their time together and they kissed. The end.

Will Natsuki be involved in some way? With her knowledge of clothing, maybe she is the one who helped tailor for Shizuru? ;p

Luu Sky Sapphire wrote:

mandygirl78 wrote:I got it! I think... Haruka enters into a cosplay show. The rule is that the costumes must be homemade - can't be bought and that no more than two other people can assist. Of course Yukino joins in and maybe Nao helps - but with a price.

The contest starts and Shizuru won first place, as usual. Haruka comes in second. That was until Nao founds out that Shizuru's costume was not homemade (How does she? I haven't figured it out.) Then Shizuru had to admit that she cheated. Thus finally Haruka has her moment.

Finally she and Yukino had their time together and they kissed. The end.

Will Natsuki be involved in some way? With her knowledge of clothing, maybe she is the one who helped tailor for Shizuru? ;p

I would like to have her involved, but I don't think she will fit in the 10-page limit.

mandygirl78 wrote:I would like to have her involved, but I don't think she will fit in the 10-page limit.

True, plus she can't fight Shizuru's battles all the time.

Any progress yet?

No...

I don't know how to start things off.

mandygirl78 wrote:No...

I don't know how to start things off.

How else?:




A private meeting in the Student Council discussing what they can do to take down Shizuru without fighting. After a few fail ideas from Haruka, Yukino recommends the cosplay contest and Haruka just runs with it and it'll write itself from there, mandy.

Thank you! Thank you!

mandygirl78 wrote:Thank you! Thank you!

You're very welcome. Now go! GO! Make the Non-ShizNat crowd happy! >:3